The line graph illustrates the number of magazine sales by a publisher in 4 European countries between 1999 and 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows the magazine
sales
by a single publisher in four countries
in Europe (France, Holland, Belgium and Germany) from 1999 to 2002. Overall
, it is clear that
two
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the two
countries
increased and the others were not positively changed.
A glance at the graph reveals that magazine sales
in Belgium marginally increased in the first year, from just around 1.8 million
euros
to 2 million
euros
, then
rose dramatically in the remaining period
to reach a peak of 5 million
euros
. Sales
in France also
experienced a positive change but it was just a slight increase over the period
. They started the period
just above 4 million
euros
and reached the same rate as Belgium at the end
of the period
.
In contrast
, the other two countries
did not experienced
improvement Change the verb form
experience
on
magazine Change preposition
in
sales
. Sales
in Germany significantly decrease over a period
. They started as the highest among four
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the four
countries
at around 4.5 million
euros
but finished as the lowest at approximately 2.5 million
euros
. Interestingly, sales
in Holland remain unchanged over four years, even though there was a slight rise in the first year, from 3 miilion
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million
euros
to around 3.2 million
euros
, it slipped back towards the end of the period
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