There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is Say what happened the last times you complained Explain what you want the manager to do.

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letter to inform you that the problem with the changing rooms has not been resolved even after a complaint was registered about it
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month. Let me explain what the issue is about.
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of all, the door of the room which is near the hall is completely broken and requires immediate attention as nobody is using it.
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, the air conditioner in the other room needs urgent repair as it makes a lot of
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. I would like to apprise you that I have discussed the same problems / issues earlier and was asked to be patient for a week as all workers were having holidays due to the Christmas break. I am very disappointed as almost 15 days have passed but the issues are not solved. It seems that nobody is paying heed to my grievances. I would like you to take immediate action to resolve the
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problems or else I would have to communicate with the authorities of the sports centre. Yours sincerely,Sona
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • frequent user
  • specific issues
  • cleanliness
  • hygiene
  • broken facilities
  • lack of supplies
  • address the issue
  • response
  • emphasize
  • well-maintained
  • comfort
  • hygiene
  • politely
  • firmly
  • request
  • resolve
  • prompt resolution
  • discuss
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