There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is Say what happened the last times you complained Explain what you want the manager to do.

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Dear sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you that the problem with the changing rooms has not been resolved even after a complaint was registered about it

last

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month. Let me explain what the issue is about.

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of all, the door of the room which is near the hall is completely broken and requires immediate attention as nobody is using it.

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, the air conditioner in the other room needs urgent repair as it makes a lot of

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. I would like to apprise you that I have discussed the same problems / issues earlier and was asked to be patient for a week as all workers were having holidays due to the Christmas break. I am very disappointed as almost 15 days have passed but the issues are not solved. It seems that nobody is paying heed to my grievances. I would like you to take immediate action to resolve the

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problems or else I would have to communicate with the authorities of the sports centre. Yours sincerely,Sona

sonia.papoyanFri Apr 17 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

174 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

frequent user
specific issues
cleanliness
hygiene
broken facilities
lack of supplies
address the issue
response
emphasize
well-maintained
comfort
hygiene
politely
firmly
request
resolve
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