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The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010

The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010
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The line graph illustrates the average cost that American customers spent on mobile and landline
phone
services
 annually over a 10-year period.
Overall
, spending on residential
phone
services
 dramatically declined,
while
popularity
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the popularity
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 of mobile
services
 increased sharply throughout
a
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the
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 decade.
Also
, both
of
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services
 met
at
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the same record in 2006. In 2001, spending on mobile
phone
services
 began by merely $200,
while
 the amount of annual
expenditure
 on
the
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residential
phone
services
 was around $700. Over the following five years,
expenditure
 on landline
phone
services
 gradually dropped below $600,
whereas
expenditure
 on cell
phone
services
 rose to just over $500. In 2006 cell phones overtook landline phones, and the
services
 became equal in popularity with customers' annual
expenditure
 of about $550.
Then
, cell
phone
 expenses rose to approximately $750 in 2010, making nearly a fourfold jump
relatively
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 to its initial figure in 2001. Meanwhile, spending on residential
phone
services
 experienced a steep fall in 2007 and went on to steadily decrease for the rest of the period.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual expenditures
  • cell phone services
  • residential phone services
  • steady increase
  • steady decrease
  • comparison
  • milestones
  • technological advancements
  • trends
  • speculating
  • paraphrasing
  • overview
  • notable changes
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