The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010
The line graph illustrates the average cost that American customers spent on mobile and landline
phone
services
annually over a 10-year period.
Overall
, spending on residential phone
services
dramatically declined, while
popularity
of mobile Add an article
the popularity
services
increased sharply throughout a
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, both of
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services
met at
the same record in 2006.
In 2001, spending on mobile Change preposition
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phone
services
began by merely $200, while
the amount of annual expenditure
on the
residential Correct article usage
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phone
services
was around $700. Over the following five years, expenditure
on landline phone
services
gradually dropped below $600, whereas
expenditure
on cell phone
services
rose to just over $500.
In 2006 cell phones overtook landline phones, and the services
became equal in popularity with customers' annual expenditure
of about $550. Then
, cell phone
expenses rose to approximately $750 in 2010, making nearly a fourfold jump relatively
to its initial figure in 2001. Meanwhile, spending on residential Change the word
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phone
services
experienced a steep fall in 2007 and went on to steadily decrease for the rest of the period.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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