International travel make people prejudiced rather that broad minded what are its causes and measures. What measures can be taken to solve this problem?

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Today, it is true that visitors coming to abroad are having prejudice mind set related to that particular country. You have thought of religions because visitors never ready to accept the different practice as they are habitual with their own myth. There are several reasons for the dissatisfaction. The biggest disappointment is their particular religious bigot.They always want themselves to be upgraded and don't want to learn with other's ethics. Fore.g. The bulk of travellers makes their judgement based on own knowledge and go against two local people.The other issue is that they are having different hobbies.They don't want to learn or accept the customs for the different nationality. As per me nationality has never made any difference between the visitors or to the person's because of we are being guided by the different locality, I should ready to learn and to know the art, practice, values and ethics of that nation as we are there to learn or to gain something new which we are not supposed to learn in our habit. The main causes are as bellow: 1. The wide variation between the Britishers and Indians. 2. The working style of the country. 3. Tourist is not accepting the habit of the local community. 4.Not follow the rules and regulation of that country. 5. Disrespect of local people. The preventive measures which we have to take are as follows: 1. Give guidance through campings, advertisement, newspapers. 2. Provide local education in the schools. 3. Provide some information to the tourist. As, the tourist is not following the customs and traditions of the local practice so it is more prejudiced as compare to broad minded.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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International travel make people prejudiced rather that broad minded what are its causes and measures. What measures can be taken to solve this problem?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Many people try to balance work and other parts of their life. However, this is very difficult to do. What are the problems associated with this? What is the best way to achieve a better balance? Write at least 250 words.

Older people often choose to spend money on themselves (e.g on hoilidays) rather than save money for their children after retirement.Is this a positive or negative development?

More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks.

Fresh water has always been a limited source in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, what measurements can governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?