Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagee?

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Today the mother Earth has shrunken, and became a global village. While, a large part of society thinks, character and culture of a person can be assessed from their dressing style,

however

, I partially agree with them, as clothes can assist a bit in it, but complete assassination cannot be done.

This

essay will elaborate various reasons for the same.

To begin

with, the character is a state of inner mind, which cannot be judged by a look at the attire of a person, so to know about a somebody, one may have to spend time with them rather

then

judging from the clothes.

For example

, in a factory there could be a huge difference between the outfits of a worker and the boss, the former may look dirty due to heavy tasks, whereas the latter may appear clean and tidy.

Thus

, it does not reveal the nature of a that human being.

Nevertheless

this

could be observed that many people with high socioeconomic status might indulge into illegal acts like: poaching; taking an animal's life for the fun, or even a poor individual may intend to rob someone to survive.

Hence

, an adult's needs decides their character, not the apparels. Moving

further

, clothes and tradition have shown a direct relation since past. To clarify, Sikh people don't only wear a turban, but have a long beard as well, People in Punjab dress up wearing "Salwar Kameez" for women and Kurta pajama" for men, but today

this

relation has vanished.

For instance

, many Sikh youngsters do not have long hair with a turban, Muslim girls do not wear

burkhaas

an excavator whose shovel bucket is attached to a hinged boom and is drawn backward to move earth

backhoes

Moreover

, they want to remain casual and updated in terms of fashion rather

then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

following the old customs only. In conclusion, I believe attire could be reliable to know the religion to some extent, but both of these cannot be completely assumed from their dressing style as it always changes with time, place, and comfort of a person.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagee?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much. Do you agree or disagree? What other types of job should be highly paid?

Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environment?

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Some young people are leaving the country side to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?