Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world, it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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Some people are of the opinion that people should marry for
love
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while others argue that in an uncertain world, it will be sensible to marry for financial purposes. In my opinion,
marriage
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should be done
in
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on
the basis of
love
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only.
Firstly
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,
marriage
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is a decision taken by two people to be together for
better for
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better, for
worse, in sickness and in health.
Therefore
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, it will take an unconditional
love
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for couples to remain with each other during hard times.
Furthermore
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,
love
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allows married people to overlook the shortcomings in their partners and other problems in
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marriage
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the marriage
. When couples are united by
love
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, it extends to their
offspring thereby
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offspring, thereby
, fostering a good relationship between them and results to a happy family.
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, couples who got married on the basis of
love
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have a positive impact on the society. They positively affect how the society views
marriage
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and
also
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sever as a standard for young people who hope to get married in the future.
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, there are certain people who marry for financial reasons a in order to better their lives.
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of
this
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, there have been an increase in the rate of divorce as couples tend to dissolve their
marriage
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when they have achieved a financial status they aimed for or when the money runs out.
For instance
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,
California
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the California marriage court
marriage
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court stated that 58% of couples who got divorced in the
last
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decade did so because
love
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wasn't the sole purpose of
marriage
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but for financial benefits.
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, the children these couples produce are often seen to be emotionally unavailable and depressed due to their parents' broken
marriage
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and the fact that they have to live apart from one of their parents. In conclusion,
marriage
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should be done for the purpose of
love
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because it produces emotionally stabled children and strengthens the relationship between parents and offsprings.
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