Universities should accept numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many
school
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schools
have a
class including
Accept comma addition
class, including
male and female students in the same classes for some reasons. I strongly believe that
this
is quite important for students to make a better result in their score as well as to be more likely to have
a strong relationship each
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a strong relationship with each
other.
firstly
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Firstly
, I think if man and women work together, they tend to bring
better outcome
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a better outcome
most of the time. There might be many different reasons, but I personally assume when male and female look at one subject, they are inclined to think and act quite differently.
Recent study
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A recent study
shows that working groups of female and male are capable of going through hard work rather than some groups which including only man, of woman because of the hormones they have
are
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been
quite different.
Secondly
, when they are together, they seem to get along with each other more easily than when there are just men or women in one group or society.
This
might sound quite strange but my own experience is able to explain
this
properly. When I was in high school, we had some
classes including
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classes, including
dual sex- even though we usually had a dominance of men in the class- and it resulted better score at the end of the
semister
one of two divisions of an academic year
semester
semesters
and most of people worked harder than before and focused what they were doing more for some reasons. To conclude, while many people still argue that male and
femal
an animal that produces gametes (ova) that can be fertilized by male gametes (spermatozoa)
female
females
student in the same class might disturb each other's study and goals, I strongly believe that have both
sex
Suggestion
sexes
in the class is critical due to the better effect of doing so and it can actually bring much stronger relationship between them.

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  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
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