Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view

Extreme recreational games like skydiving and skiing are very risky and should be prohibited.

Although

these games are good healthy activities, there are some dangers involved. In my opinion, I disagree with the prohibition. Skydiving and skiing i

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are

an important exercise which promotes physical activity and can

also

be for fun. Promotion of

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is necessary as it aids in blood circulation, maintains good health, helps to burn energy and tones muscles. According to research work carried out by Westfield University in 2016, it was listed as a way of keeping fit.

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Therefore, this

this

game should be encouraged and taught properly to interested individuals.

However

, there are some dangers encountered if proper care is not taken

such

as f

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falls

a fall

from height. In a case of minor mistake the person could f

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fall, leading

to spinal cord injury which could p

aralyze

make powerless and unable to function

paralyse

the individual. Skydivers can be injured by faulty parachutes, but more often it is the result of human error, 

for instance

, in my 5th year of nursing school, I managed a paraplegic patient and

this

was caused

as a result

of f

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a fall

the fall

from skydiving. It is advised that proper measures should be taken to avoid

further

occurrence. To sum up, the health benefits outweighs the setbacks which is man made and can be avoided, so there is no need for the game to be barred.