Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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Music
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is good for mind, body and soul for a
person
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. It can bring joy and sad at the same moment with a different
person
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. In my opinion, it can be played in every occasion where age and culture doesn't matter to anyone. I observed that
music
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can help a
person
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to forget about his sorrow when he was in the vulnerable moment.
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, when a
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dies, his loved one will remember him the most and
music
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helps to forget the pain and it gives him the company in his lonely time. It helps him to remember their previous time when they were together.
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, we are surrounded by different types of cultures and people and
music
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varies from
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to
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and
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culture to culture. If there is a good taste of
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and good people, no one can differentiate them.
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as young people like hard rock
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when they go to clubs or pub to party and
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they like some slow motion
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when they are with their partner. It
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happens with adults and older people.
On the other hand
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, some people disagree because there are restrictions in some religion. Like, in Islam, it is
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for people to listen or sing or play any instruments.
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, most adults or old people do not like to listen because they think there is only one type of
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exists in the world and
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hard rock or pop musics. In conclusion, I would like to say that
music
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cannot be old or new. It is made for bringing the closed ones near to our heart.
Submitted by farhanashreya2009 on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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