Some people believe that restoration of old buildings costs too much; we should demolish them and build new ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is important to consider that how the buildings of the past should be utilized. Many people contend that restoring them would be heavy on their pockets and it would be better to replace them
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with
newly constructed buildings.
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, I partially agree with
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argument as some
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sites should be reserved for cultural and economic purposes. One of the major
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reasons
for demolishing old buildings is that their poor conditions.
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buildings can be damaged easily in some natural calamities and fixing it for future use could be a waste of money.
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to
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,
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buildings should be monitored by appropriate government authorities so that if someone purchases
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constructed sites, they should inform them that it needed to be reconstructed.
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, the space of these sites can be used for other purposes,
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construction of schools, parks, offices or shopping malls which might generate more jobs around the area.
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, some ancient sites have good base structure,
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it should be kept for
restroration
the act of restoring something or someone to a satisfactory state
restoration
purposes. As these buildings can be used for the purpose of enhancing tourism by preserving
heritage
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way of construction artefacts.
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, they can be restored into
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hotels and resorts as well. To illustrate
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, in many countries around the world, they have kept their historic constructions as an
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artefact
, which generates enormous tourism in their countries. To sum up,
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restoring all old buildings would definitely be an expensive call; especially if they lack strength in them. In my view, some of them should be restored as a cultural
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of the past to boost economic activities
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as tourism.
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