Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.

In 1888, for the
first
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time the vehicles emerged
by
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in
Britain. In 2000, the cars increased to above 29 million over the routes of Britain. Alternatively, the mechanisms of transmissions must be motivated,
however
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, universal legal standards recognized to overcome the usage of cars by their owners. I agree with
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opinion,
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, I would like to justify the matter and provide a solution
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for
it. After emergence of
car
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in Britain, it speared into around the world whereby people
have been used
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have been using
it in their life’ needs
such
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as work, school, university,
vising
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visaing
friends etc.
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development caused creating of many cars over the roads compared to
past
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the past
because the economic level of
people
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the people
is presently better and higher than before
,
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,
for
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example
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, people have salary based on their jobs and they can buy it. What is more, the cars can make folks’ businesses easier and faster because populace previously did not use the
car
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when they would need
it but
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it, but
they
utilized
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utilized, for
for
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example
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horses for anything as they would want to visit or to go.
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, the traffic jumps and accidents happen due to many of
vehicles
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the vehicles
on the routes.
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, in all countries, there are some procedures on the owners of the cars under
international legal system
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an international legal system
such
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as driver license, ownership regulations of cars, alarms of seeped limits etc. Meanwhile, it is important
to
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for
countries to find new alternatives for transporting people rather than their independent cars.
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example
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, establishing Metro lines more than enough,
dedication
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the dedication
of many busses in everywhere.
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may reduce the crowd on the roads. Another reason of alternative mechanism of transmission is the countries will able to reduce pressure of people on the consuming of
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fuel especially
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fuel, especially
those countries which are facing the reduction of
fuel
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,
therefore
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, they can provide
new form
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a new form
of
car
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that is
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called electric
car
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, these cars could be driven by electric on behalf of
fuel
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.
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, it must be concern the
people
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person's
capacity to buy it. Another
example
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is the cars could be manufactured through gas.
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, it can be said that these alternatives will give those countries the best solution in case of diminution of
fuel
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. In conclusion, it discussed that
existence
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the existence
of numerous of cars on the roads were because of many
decries
issue a decree
decrees
of individuals. Whilst, it illustrated the cases of countries which are facing lack of
fuel
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.
Therefore
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, I generally believed that the governments can create new transportation tools of people
such
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as Metro lines, electric or gas cars in order to prevent crowded ways and lack of
fuel
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.

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