Many people think that it is best to accept a bad situation,
such
as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Linking Words
However
, some people think that it is better to try to improve Linking Words
such
situations. In the following paragraphs, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.
From my point of view, accepting the poor position helps people become accustomed to a bad occasion. Linking Words
This
contributes to pleasant social skills. Linking Words
In other words
, they can adapt to other societies easier than people who do not have pleasant social skills. Linking Words
In addition
, accepting bad situations can improve tolerance. Linking Words
For instance
, most people have more patience when they endure an unsatisfactory job. Linking Words
However
, there is another terrible effect too. A bad position can lead to mental problems. Nowadays, many people have to consult with a doctor because of mental problems, and some people might even choose to kill themselves.
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On the other hand
, some people believe that trying to improve a bad event is better than just accepting it. In my personal opinion, Linking Words
this
action is more beneficial. Linking Words
First
, it can bring about a better situation, Linking Words
such
as trying to earn more money in case of a shortage of money. Linking Words
Furthermore
, improving a poor position Linking Words
also
contributes to a satisfactory result for each person. Linking Words
Second
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this
can encourage personal ambition. That means every time of trying or improving unsatisfactory situations will lead to more ambitious.
In conclusion, these two opinions on the topic, it's still very personal for many people. Both of these views have benefits, but the Linking Words
first
aspect has some drawbacks, while another aspect does not have any drawbacks.Linking Words