“Nowadays children are undisciplined because their parents are busy with their career.” To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What could parents do to build a sense of discipline among children?

It is an indisputable fact that many adults compulsively build their career.

Consequently

, they spend less

time

educating their offsprings. It is agreed that the main reason why

childnen

a young person of either sex

children

are

undisciplinied

not subjected to discipline

undisciplined

is the parents

overconcentration

on their jobs.

This

essay will prove

this

thesis and underline an appropriate measure for creating

sustained relationship

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a sustained relationship

with youngsters to develop

discipline

.

Firstly

, the current trends of live motivate adults to

achive

to gain with effort

achieve

more in their careers,

as a

result it

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result, it

becames

enter or assume a certain state or condition

becomes

became

the main reason why children do not follow rules.

The vivid

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The most vivid

example of

this

is my niece,

whoose

of which person?

whose

who's

parents are concentrating on achieving top level positions in their firms, and her behaviour is mostly created based on information from the Internet which forces her teachers to call her parents because of her misbehaviour. It is hard to argue, that not only her parents choose career prospective rather than spending

time

on education of their babies, but it is a modern trend.

Therefore

, the

wronge

not correct; not in conformity with fact or truth

wrong

choice of achieving high-level positions is the main result why children are uneducated of appropriate behaviour.

However

, if parents spend more

time

with their offsprings, it will allow them to create

valuable relationship

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valuable relationships

a valuable relationship

with their children and build a sense of

discipline

.

The vivid

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The most vivid

example of

this

is a statistic from the Moscow education department, which

questionaired

an instance of questioning

questioned

question aired

adults about an average

time which

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time, which

they spend with their kids and linked it

with

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to

teacher characteristics of children’s

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

, the statistic shows that a child who get more parents’ attention are 70 per cent more likely to follow the rules of

kindergarden

a preschool for children age 4 to 6 to prepare them for primary school

kindergarten

.

Therefore

, common events and games with a son or a

daugher

a female human offspring

daughter

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are

enought

as much as necessary

enough

to create a sense of rules. To conclude, society faces lack of

discipline

among youngsters. The main reason of

this

is that parents

persue

carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in

pursue

their career advantages rather than spending

time

with their offsprings.

However

, if they have more games with their children and other communications as well, it will be enough to create a sense of

discipline

among their kids. It is hoped that in the future parents will find work-

live

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life

balance.