You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony. Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: – Explain that you have completed your studies – Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code – Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for
Dear Mom and Dad,
I hope you are doing great. I am glad to inform you that I have successfully completed my bachelor’s degree.
Thus
, you guys are invited to attend the graduation ceremony which is going to held
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be held
on
the Change preposition
in
first
week of the next
month.
Yesterday I got an email regarding the venue details, so I thought I should inform you at
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in
first
place to prevent travel delay. The Ceremony is going to Correct article usage
the first
held
in the fishbowl Centre of Douglas college at 2:30 PM on 25th JulyAdd a missing verb
be held
,
2019. The dress code is formal suit for men and western dress for Remove the comma
apply
the
women.
As you know, I have Correct article usage
apply
stronger
connection with my grandparents, and I want them to attend my graduation along with my siblings, but there are only 4 tickets available per person. Add an article
a stronger
Although
, I have requested for
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apply
the
more tickets and Correct article usage
apply
college
said that they will inform me if there are additional seats available. Correct article usage
the college
Therefore
, I will let you if we can arrange tickets.
Let me know if you have any questions and I hope to see you soon.
Yours Lovingly,
Jaspreet KaurUnauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite