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Artists need a certain amount of freedom of develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Art is an amalgamation of thoughts and feelings of an
artist
.
Therefore
, it is required to give them full
freedom
 for
best outcome
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the best outcome
 from an
artist
.
However
, some people are totally against with
this
 statement. I surely agreed that
freedom
 is necessary for an
artist but
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artist, but
 it should be given
with
Suggestion
to
 keeping in mind of society.
To begin
 with, there are many reasons for giving full
freedom
 to the artists for their work.
Firstly
, artists have
very creative mind
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a very creative mind
 and they can convert their
idias
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
ideas
ideals
idols
 into their art and
then
 they may show it to the world which would be the best for their successful career. Artists should be patronized for their talent and contribution in the society because of their dedication and hard work.
However
, artists could not describe every thought in their art due to society’s fear and it
will resulted
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will result
 in mental disturbance for them. As an instance, as per the history of Tajmahal of
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
, both hands had been cut of each worker involved in construction by the order of Mughal king Shahjahan since they can never construct another Tajmahal for anyone else.
On the other hand
, as per other people every
though
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
 of an
artist
 may not
effect
have an effect upon
affect
 positively on the people.
However
, some artists do not accept
this
 and they expose some unnecessary things in their ideas which may not likable from society.
For example
, before some years an
artist
 from Korea had organized an exhibition and he had painted wrong belongings about a particular religion and it had hurt most of the people of
whole country
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the whole country
.
Therefore
, an
artist
 should be given restricted
freedom
. In conclusion, I certainly agree with that the artists should be allowed to enhance their creative thoughts yet government should decide that
this
 creativity may not hurt people’s feeling.

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