Letter 1 A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Your friend has written a letter to you asking for advice regarding a visit that his/her parents will be making to your area in the near future. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • recommend a place where they can stay • suggest the places they can visit • offer to do something with them
Dear Shahnoza
Thank you so much for the lovely birthday present! I really appreciate your kindness.
I’m excited to hear that your parents will be visiting our area soon. For their stay, I recommend the
five stars
Hotel. It is comfortable, clean, and located near many attractions. They will find everything they need there.
During their visit, they can visit the City Museum, which has interesting exhibits for all ages. Central Park is perfect for a relaxing walk, and the Toshkent area has nice restaurants and shops. If they enjoy history, the old town tour is a must-see.
I would love to spend time with you and your parents Correct your spelling
five-star
while
they are here. Maybe we can go out for dinner one evening or visit some of the attractions together. Let me know what works best for you.
Looking forward to seeing you all soon!
yours faithfully,
MadinaSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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task achievement
Consider elaborating more on what makes these recommendations appealing for the visit, such as specific activities or sights that might interest your friend's parents.
coherence cohesion
Try to maintain a logical flow by connecting each point more clearly to the next, enhancing the overall smoothness of the letter.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are done very well, creating a warm and personal tone suitable for a letter to a friend.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph effectively focuses on a single idea, making it easy for the reader to follow your suggestions.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and inviting, perfectly suited for communication with a friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,