Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter, suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing with regard to an ad mentioning that you need some help every day in the coming summer for some hours at your home. I can help you to cook your meals. I have a professional experience in
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assistant for 3 years.
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, to do that I had to do a professional course where I learned to make different types of dishes like Italian, French and so on. So, I think I am a good fit to help prepare meals for you. I want to help you because I want to improve my level of English. As much as I will spend my time with you and talk with you I can enhance my vocabulary and accent, which will upgrade my career. Not only
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I am eager to learn about your culture and country.
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I will gather knowledge about your country's history. I am available every weekend the whole day but on weekdays I am available only in the evening like 5pm to 9pm. As I am a student and I have class and other work so in those times I can help you.
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, on any holiday I am able to spend time with you if you want. I hope I will hear from you soon. Kind regards, Md Monirul Khan Haidher
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Try to use more varied transition words or phrases to enhance the flow between paragraphs.
task achievement
Consider elaborating a bit more on the specific duties you can assist with at Mrs. Barrett's home.
coherence cohesion
The opening and closing of your letter are appropriate and friendly, which aligns well with the context of the task.
task achievement
You have covered all parts of the task, including how you can help, your interest in the work, and your availability, providing a well-rounded response.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Domestic chores
  • Culinary skills
  • Horticulture
  • Cultural immersion
  • Work ethic
  • Flexible schedule
  • Time management
  • Prior commitments
  • Punctuality
  • Reliability
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