Write a letter to the charity event Explain the situation

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter to get an opportunity to support

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apply

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a charity event. I have seen the advertisement in a local newspaper on 15, March. The predominant reason for my interest

towards

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this

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ongoing event is

due to

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the support given by

the

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society.

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, I have been studying the medical research course with the aid given by a charitable trust. I have

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much dependent on that organisation since my childhood for my education.

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year, I had participated in the programme of distribution of

stationary

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for school children, organised by the

Nestam

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Nesta

Charitable trust. I have primarily

involved

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in packing up

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those stationary

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in the bags and transportation of items to the respective schools. For your ongoing occasion, I can provide my sincere support for that entire day irrespective of indoor or outdoor activities.

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, if you

required

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any funds for

this

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celebration, please let me know so that I will plan for

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fundraising

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fund raising

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fundraising

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activity with the help of my contacts. Looking forward

for

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your invitation to the upcoming ceremony. Thank you so much. Yours faithfully, Meera Sharee

Apr 18, 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

187 words

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