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Your first impressions when you meet someone are always right

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, from my observation, people tend to hide away their true nature during the
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first
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 encounters with strangers.
This
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 is possibly due to the feelings of doubts and insecurity associated with having to socialise with unfamiliar individuals. To illustrate, despite my usual free-spirited and light-headed
demeanor
(behavioral attributes) the way a person behaves toward other people
demeanour
, when I
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 got acquainted with my friends, I used to be very meticulous with my choice of words since at the beginning, I still kept my guards up with them. I believe, these polar social
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
 are common among members of society and
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,
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 impressions do not always reflect one's characteristics and should not be treated as the guidelines to do so.
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, people are liable to make false judgments on one’s personality traits during their
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 meeting. The explanation for
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 statement, as cited in numerous psychological studies, is that people seem to remember negative, highly immoral actions more vividly than positive, moral ones as the former are often less typical and more spontaneous. From my personal experience,
for instance
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, I always seem to associate people with their bad
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
such
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 as littering or cursing more frequently than with meritorious ones
such
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 as helping out a stranger when needed. In
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 case, I strongly feel that if I decide to infer one’s attributes based on
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 biased feelings, I will always reach the wrong conclusion. All in all, I take the view that we should not rely on
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 impressions as they can be influenced by many factors.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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