A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear...,
Dear Sam,
I hope you're well. I'm sorry to hear that you have difficulty adapting to your new school, I'm just writing to give you some advice which could help you in
this
situation.
I know that making a new friend can be difficult sometimes but it will help you to adapt to your new place and there are several ways to have some. Linking Words
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, try to invite one of the students to eat a meal with you. It doesn't need to be complicated, a couple of sandwiches would be more than enough. Linking Words
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student about common preferences and ask him to be your friend. Linking Words
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, you may consider contacting him through one of the social media platforms and chatting with each other.
One of the good ideas to cope with your new school is by joining clubs. You can Linking Words
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participate in school activities. In Linking Words
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places, you can introduce yourself to new people who have the same interests as you.
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thing I want to tell you is that fitting into new places often takes time, so be patient and I promise you that you Linking Words
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will get used to it.
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suitable writing tone
Try to maintain a consistent tone throughout the letter. It starts off empathetically and ends on a slightly pragmatic note.
complete response
Consider elaborating more on how joining clubs could specifically help in making friends.
logical structure
You have structured the letter well with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
greeting and closing
The use of greeting and closing expressions effectively frames the informal letter style.
single idea per paragraph
Using separate paragraphs for different ideas, like making friends and joining clubs, enhances readability.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite