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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Nowadays, an increasing number of people around the world are interested in researching their family history. What are the main motivations behind this? Do you think this is a positive trend? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words.

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A great curiosity arises in the people in exploring their family history. In my opinion, It is the best way to look at the common trends in the passing generation and can assist in providing much of the information. Beginning with, most people tend to look into the family background to notice about the similar features which can be any mark, talent or even disabilities passing from our ancestors.
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facilitates us by giving the knowledge of our elders and to their life capital. Another reason can be a general interest in the lives and struggles of the elderly people. In some classes, many unknown martyrs are found whose efforts remained hidden due to lack of information, but curiosity to travel through the past could do justice to them. From a general viewpoint, the trend is regarded as positive and extremely helpful in finding a new pathway or giving direction to the course of life. Because of
this
, one could get and idea about the early made decisions by the forebears and
further
 amend those tasks in the present life by learning from the mistakes.
For example
, one from a patriarchy of noble persons could get a direction towards helping people or one could rectify the mistakes made with their fathers' Concluding, it must be the responsibility of everyone, especially, children t
o learn
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learn
about family history and heritage so as to remain attached to the roots and prevent ourselves from detaching from our early aura.
This
 would
also
 be regarded as a tribute to our great forefathers.
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