Climate change is an urgent issue and it is believed that the utilization of fossil fuels should be stopped and alternative energy resources should be used instead. It is however believed that oil, gas, and coal are indispensable. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant example
In recent times, abrupt changes in weather conditions have posed a severe threat to our ecosystem. It is argued we should adapt to utilisation of the renewable
energy
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resources
, and stop the consumption of fossil fuels Use synonyms
whereas
it is believed that Linking Words
such
gases are required for our survival. In my opinion, adapting to natural Linking Words
resources
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such
as wind and solar could help us to mitigate the negative effects of global warming.
To commence with, natural Linking Words
sources
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energy
are environmentally friendly. Use synonyms
For instance
, it has been reported that 75% of air pollution is caused Linking Words
due to
the release of greenhouse gases which are omitted from the over-utilisation of non-reusable Linking Words
sources
. So, natural Use synonyms
energy
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resources
do not pose any threats to our environment by omitting any kind of toxic fumes so, they can be consumed as an alternative to the fossil fuels Use synonyms
such
as oil, gas, and coal. Linking Words
As a result
, we can make our environment pollution free which can lead to fewer diseases among the masses.
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Secondly
, alternative Linking Words
sources
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energy
are considered Use synonyms
as
the future of the world. The availability of fossil fuels Change preposition
apply
are
not enough to meet the future demands of the world Change the verb form
is
whereas
substitute power Linking Words
sources
can be used as long as we want because these power Use synonyms
resources
are natural Use synonyms
such
as solar Linking Words
energy
, and wind Use synonyms
energy
. Consuming Use synonyms
such
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resources
of Use synonyms
energy
; Use synonyms
therefore
, could reduce the negative effects of non-renewable Linking Words
energy
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sources
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such
as rising sea temperature, adverse impact of greenhouse gases, and avoid natural disasters.
In conclusion, I still believe that for a clean environment, and avoid natural calamities masses should start utilising substitute power Linking Words
sources
as they are eco-friendly Use synonyms
as well as
prominent Linking Words
sources
of Use synonyms
energy
in the near future.Use synonyms
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While the essay presents a clear stance and provides relevant arguments and examples, the example used to support the environmental benefits of renewable energy could be more specific and detailed to strengthen the argument further.
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