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Stores should sell local food products and not imported food products. Do you agree or disagree?

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Stores should sell indigenously made
food
 products or imported
food
 products is a highly debatable topic.In my opinion stores should have a mix of both local and imported
food
 products, the reasons are being stated in
this
 essay.
Firstly
, People who support locally made
food
 products argue that, selling local made products will boost their country's economy and it will give its farmers and cultivators more profit from their produce.They
also
 is of the opinion that money should not go outside of their home country.
Secondly
,
Accept space
,
 some people argue that using local made produce restrict buying class of varieties which is available in important
food
 products.They
also
 state that usually the imported snack products are of higher quality and it protects the general population from various diseases. It is evident that there are merits and de-merits of local feed products and imported
food
 products.I am of the opinion that stores should find a balance between the two so that people are free to choose from
variety
Suggestion
a variety
the variety
 and quality
food
 products without adversely affecting the country's economic balance.

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