To what extent do the internet increase social cohension

As the world becomes more integrated, using the

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is becoming more popular in both developed and developing countries. Some

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think that the more widely-used

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is, the more isolated society is.

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, I argue that the

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can affect family,

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, and colleagues in both good and bad ways.

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, the

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has the potential to diminish family life, but

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enhance it. It helps members

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a family stay in touch with each other. It is particularly true for foreign students who want to call their families without too expensive

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.

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, couples are easily addicted to online gaming or other online activities.

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leads to children's ignorance and carelessness or even a bad example.

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, the

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can distract

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from

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, but it

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helps

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to keep and make

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.

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, it is possible for an injured person stuck at home to use the

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to keep in touch with his

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. Evenly,

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can meet

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through social networking.

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, shy teens who are always surfing the

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may lose their social skills or be taken advantage of by their

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they have never met.

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, the

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;

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, it can

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make it easier to work together.

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of going out for a meeting,

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tend to read emails all day. Using too

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may make

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less active.

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, the

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brings several advantages to

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.

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, emails and instant messaging are more useful than phoning for collaboration.

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, the

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allows

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to work from a far distance in case they cannot go to the office.

to sum up

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, the

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can make our life better or worse. If used appropriately, it can create more togetherness than we thought.