Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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has become a smaller village. It is not amazing that when people meet together. More and more people are moving from rural areas to urban areas. The trend of migrating one place to another place has become very common in all over the earth. At present, people go in order to

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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