Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays people have different views about
sport
Suggestion
the sport
. Some of them think that if you want to be successful in
sport
you must be strong and powerful. Others say that physical
strength
is not
mainly thing
Suggestion
a manly thing
a mainly thing
because most important is mental
strength
. In my opinion, it is impossible to have results without any of them. On the one hand, a person cannot become a sportsman without physical
strength
. It is the mainly part of
sport
Suggestion
the sport
to be strong and powerful. You can have a dream about runner's career, but if you not quickly and adroit, you can forget about it.
For example
, one boy wants to be a boxer and he is a mentally strong person, but he does not have talent, his dream is not real. So, without physical
strength
sport
cannot exist.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • physical conditioning
  • athleticism
  • physical training
  • muscle strength
  • mental resilience
  • psychological preparedness
  • mental toughness
  • confidence
  • precision
  • focus
  • mental strategies
  • mental fortitude
  • brute strength
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