Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Punishing people who commit crimes is crucial to maintaining law and order in a society. Some people believe that there should be a fixed

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for each

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. Others disagree. In their opinion, factors

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as the motive behind the

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too should be considered while deciding on the

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.

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I agree that people who commit crimes should be given exemplary

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, in my opinion, the judge should

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consider the circumstances that led to the

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. If there is a fixed

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for each

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, all people who commit murder will get the same

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system will certainly improve judgement efficiency. Since the

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for each

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has already been given in law books, judges only have to pronounce the verdict.

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the punishments are consistent with regulations established previously, there will be fewer law conflicts. Unfortunately, the above arguments in favour of a fixed

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are not as logical as they sound. Human behaviour is almost always influenced by circumstances.

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is no different. It is possible for two people who commit murders to have entirely different motives. Perhaps one of them committed the act with the deliberate intention to kill while the other was merely trying to save himself from the attacker while committing the murder accidentally. If there are fixed punishments for murder, both of them will receive the same

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.

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is unfair. It is

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unfair to give juveniles the same

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as adults. It is

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evident that serious ethical issues may arise if fixed punishments are given for each

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. In my opinion, while awarding the

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the judge should consider not only the severity of the

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crime but

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crime, but

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the circumstances that led to it. To conclude, it does not make sense to have fixed

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for each

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because no two persons who commit the same

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have the same motive.