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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.Do you agree or disagree.

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According to some people, cleaning and organising the things in houses and offices is essential. I agree with the argument as we feel more pleasant when we see our clean our house, and furniture items look amazing if it places in an organised way. On the one hand, Keeping our home or organisation neat and tidy will makes us comfortable because the messy surroundings distract or distress people. If things are not kept in the right place, we will have to waste much time searching for them.
For example
, many people consume their time when they lost their valuable household articles
such
 as keys, clothes, and gadgets. If people keep the object in the correct position where they comforted to find out, it can be saved their time and energy.
On the other hand
, all items kept in a way in our house and office that everyone feels relaxing when they see the items.
This
 means that we need to clean the article regularly and change the item if it is broken.
As a result
, it is the duty of each member who lives in the house to keep the household objects neat and clean, and it is essential to keep things properly. To illustrate, a friend of mine organised books on the shelf, and he decorates his bookshelf in the way as it looks astonishing so that it is easy to find the book as all books keep at the proper place. To conclude, I believe that it is vital to organise various things in the correct place as an organisation helps to find items quickly.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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