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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in 21st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates

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The rate of global warming is growing increasingly fast in the developing world.
This
 will be shown by flooding in some areas.There are several reasons are followed below which is saying more significant and there is still a lot to be done to exterminate the problem.
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e predominant cause which brings about the current concern is water flooding in some countries.
As a result
 of
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 actions people are suffering from destroying their house.
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after high water people have to repair their house again.
Secondly
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against rising
ea levels which originate these ir
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ituations.The responsibility should be addressed to the go
verment t
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
o find out necessary unraveling ways.
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 actions,h
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mans could not be in danger. One final solution to work out
this
 issue with ease is to be on good terms to
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eeds a good attitude of humans.
This
 would help society as a whole and adopt resolutions,
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kewise demand on citizens to be friendly with nature.All things considered, there are several measures which could be undertaken to improve the attitude to the nature as long as to solve problems which people have faced tr
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