Discuss advantages and disadvantages of watching TV during childhood
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Nowadays, most
time
watching television
and television
cannot replace the book as a learning tool and on the other hand
children are less well educated. In this
essay I will exlain
make plain and comprehensible
explain
further
and give my opinions.
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tv
in their free time but
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time, but
tv
all of time
. Suggestion
the time
Firstly
nowadays children are less educated for several reasons and got less homework by teachers. Furthermore
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Furthermore, television
television
cannot replace the book as a learning topic, tool and etc. Mostly
children think that watching Suggestion
Most
tv
most comfortable for learning and relaxing than books .
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.
disagree
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disagree with this
this
idea because always tv
programs cannot replace books and watching tv
has more disadvantages for children healthy and waste a great deal of necessary time
. Consequently they
are lost crystalline lens and undeveloped their world outlook. Accept comma addition
Consequently, they
For example
a lot of famous journals published interesting points about watching tv
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children, which
prefer
watching Suggestion
preferred
preferring
tv
and reading book always second
children percentages higher than other children.
On the other
hand watching
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hand, watching
television
help for learning something but
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something, but
time
. Some children believe that television
important for their life or study .
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tv
programs about study or interesting games is one of the most important programs in their free time
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tv
is more unseccesful way
for children and I wholeheartedly believe that Suggestion
the more unsuccessful way
more unsuccessful way
this
trend should be changed. As an example research
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school but
children completely not used from successful way.
To sum up I strongly disagree to prefer watching Accept comma addition
school, but
tv
than learning by children.It is true that television
cannot replace books.Submitted by kochimovnazirjon on
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