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Some people think that countries should limit the amount of food that they import and mainly eat products from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The Lord has blessed with different types of
food
 in various parts of the world.
Earth
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The earth
 is divided into countries with their boundaries. Actually,
food
 is the source of energy
to
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in
 our body and
consequently
 helps for good health. After India, was conquered by some other
country
, many spices came to
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
 from that conquerer
country
,
otherwise
 we did not have those spices in India. We don't need to discuss much about how spices bring good taste
to
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in
food
. All the good
food
 lovers
knows
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know
 it.
Firstly
,
British
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the British
 entered into India, because of the spice trade only. For a very good and healthy body, we require
variety
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a variety
 of foods, that are produced all over
to
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for
until
by
World
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the World
. It is always
recomended
push for something
recommended
 to cultivate all the
food
 products here itself in our
country
, if we can. Even though, we want to produce all the
food
 products, in our own
country
,
some times
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
 some
food
 items will not be produced because of the
cliamatic
of or relating to a climate
climatic
climactic
climate
 condition.
For example
, Olive oil, is not produced in India. It tastes good and very good for health.
Thus
, we are ought to import it is only the option.
Finally
, to conclude, if our financial condition supports, it is always good to import
food
 from all over the world.
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