In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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No doubt in my mind, there will be major improvements to the current transportation systems and infrastructure of the roads. With all the breakthroughs in technology today, in my estimation, highways will become 2 or 3 tier roads, buses will be replaced by fast trains, and ocean liners will be able to transport people faster than before. According to recent news reports, three times as many people own and drive personal vehicles nowadays than 10 years ago.

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is probably the number one reason why air pollution has skyrocketed in the

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two decades. Huge metropolitan cities have overcrowded highways and inner-city streets. Not only is there a pollution problem, but there’s

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a major traffic problem because the infrastructure can’t handle the mass amounts of cars on the roadways. Another change in transportation I see is the use of motorbikes, more so in the cities. From my understanding, because they are less expensive to buy and maintain and they are quicker than cars when

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through traffic jams. Motorbikes can weave in and out of traffic more easily.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

179 words

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