Write a letter to a bookstore manager who is living in another city. Ask him/ her to make available a book that you are interested in. In you letter. What book you are looking for? Why you need this book How you plan to purchase the book.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope that you are doing well. The purpose of
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letter is to reserve a book for me from your bookstore.
First and foremost, the name of the book is Python For Robotics the second edition written by Dr. Dhruvi Patel. Linking Words
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, all the exercises in it are exceptionally well structured which will help enhance my knowledge.
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if that's convenient for you.
Please confirm the availability of the book.
Thank you for your help in advance.
Sincerely,
Ruchin PatelRemove the comma
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Consider adding a brief introduction of who you are to add context to the letter.
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Maintain a slightly more formal tone by using 'would' instead of 'will'.
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The letter addresses all the necessary points clearly: the book title, why you need it, and how you plan to purchase it.
coherence cohesion
The logical flow of the letter makes it easy to follow with a clear reason for writing, purpose, and next steps.
coherence cohesion
The letter uses appropriate greetings and closing which enhances the overall tone and structure of a formal letter.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.