Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only large companies and goverments can make a difference. What extent do you agree or disagree.
There has been controversy about whether governments should be responsible for making a difference or whether communities on their own are capable of taking care of the environment. I personally disagree with
this
notion and Linking Words
this
essay explains the reasons before presenting a conclusion.
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To begin
with, any efforts have an impact and matter. Linking Words
Firstly
, Folks can at least clean and green their surroundings because it takes just a little effort. Linking Words
Moreover
, they are the ones who will receive the immediate benefits. The society, Linking Words
for example
, which has lots of trees will see almost 4 degrees cooler in climate compared with the society which does not. Linking Words
Secondly
, There are numerous things which individuals can do as an initiative Linking Words
as well as
planting trees on birthdays and as return gifts they can see positive impacts on the surroundings.
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Thirdly
, citizens have a moral duty in terms of cleaning their environments. Linking Words
In addition
, reuse and recycle their waste in proper ways. A survey at Sharif University, Linking Words
for instance
, shows that if people take a step to reduce carbon emissions by just 25 per cent, the environment will start self-healing itself. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the more people take action to save their mother world, the more our earth will be greenery and safe. Linking Words
lastly
, the public should be aware of how and where they put away their garbage. Linking Words
Therefore
, if no ones take care of these issues the sea and oceans become so dirty.
In conclusion, every human should take it into consideration to take a step regarding saving their mother earth and their surrounding environment. Linking Words
Additionally
, from my perspective, as I mentioned in aforesaid paragraphs, every step and action matters and has benefits on the citizens' lives immediately.Linking Words
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task response
The essay introduces the topic and provides a conclusion, but the development of main ideas could be enhanced. Ensure each paragraph possesses a clear central idea and that it is elaborated on sufficiently for the reader to fully understand your viewpoint. It's necessary to delve deeper into your examples, providing detailed elaboration and explicitly linking them back to the main argument.
coherence and cohesion
The essay's logical structure needs improvement. Ideational progression from one point to the next is somewhat erratic; this can confuse the reader. Use a wider range of cohesive devices to create a more fluent connection between ideas, paragraphs, and the overall argument. Maintain consistency with your argument across the essay to reinforce the stance you are taking.