Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant’s past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

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Several countries in the British
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the official name of some states in the United States (Massachusetts and Pennsylvania and Virginia and Kentucky) and associated territories (Puerto Rico)
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do not provide the
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to a defendant’s past criminal record to ensure a fair trial. Some lawyers who oppose
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perspective believe the
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should be provided a complete picture of the defendant’s past so that they can make a more informed decision. While it is true that past behaviour can be a prediction of future behaviour, I agree with the status quo since people are inherently biased, and sentencing should be for rehabilitation, not punishment.
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with, it is important that a
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remains objective throughout the trial. Bias is an inherent part of human nature, and a well functioning judicial system will attempt to minimize it. If a
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has
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to a defendant’s criminal past, they could develop negative feelings towards the defendant which may cloud their judgement.
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, bias can be seen in schools where a teacher perceives a student to be bad based on the opinion of other teachers, not on their observations of the student. Unfortunately, in most cases, these students do not succeed
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. The stakes are even higher in criminal cases. Along with minimizing bias, criminal sentencing
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on rehabilitation, not punishment. The most beneficial outcome is if a criminal can be rehabilitated and become a productive member of society. Giving a
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to a
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past record may result in harsher sentencing since it is difficult for a
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to untangle pathos from logos.
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, statistics across numerous US
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prisons show that the punitive measures have little effect on lowering the recidivism rates.
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, rehabilitation programs are more effective to integrate criminals back into society.
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, the
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should only focus on the case at hand. In short, a
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should not have
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to a defendant’s criminal history to ensure a fair trial and the most effective form of sentencing that will benefit all.

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