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Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion?

#teenagers #lives #generations
Nowadays, environment
change
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changes
has changed
is changing
 strongly than the past,
that is
 why in our organism are happened different exchange of hormones as rye result of
this
 in all age groups especially youngest people. And it pressed
feel
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felt
 more stressful
.
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this
 essay, it will be discussed
this
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a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opening
opinions
 and give my point of view. Personally, I believe that in the world
from
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of
 tiny creatures to
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English poet (born in 1930)
Hughes
 related and
effective
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effectively
effected
 with each other including humanity is depended with them too. In recent
time
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times
 environmental pollution is acted
us
to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
as
.
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.
 Not only natural
things but
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things, but
 artificial things are can hurt us pain like technology
.
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.
 In fact that, all age groups use
phone especially
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phone, especially
youngers
used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
 like me. They play, study or communicate with friends for
this
 reason they use it a lot. As
result
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a result
the result
 of
it they
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it, they
 have different illnesses I definitely feel that when I use my phone regularly I have
headache
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a headache
 and become stressful as the result of problem with mobile phone or internet connection the situations which happened in usual. I am convinced that, there are other
reason because
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reason, because
 teenagers become more stressful is that their parents did not give attention or
ere
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
 not kind enough with their children. Parents think only earn money for living better and busy with no ending work so
that is
 why they have not got time for their child because of
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
teenegers
a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity
teenagers
 feel
along
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a long
 and stressful for
this
reason unfortunately
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reason, unfortunately
,
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,
 they go away the things can cause damage their health as
narcosis
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narcotics
 and drugs which can
halped
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help
helped
 stress relief. To sum up, all things among us interrelated with each other and in fact that they
usual
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usually
 effect us.

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