Government should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports Do you agree or disagree

Almost any day of the week, you can look at the newspaper and read articles about how the government is wrong to allocate

money

and should pay more attention to

education

than to

recreation

and

sports

There are several controversial points of view on

this

issue and everyone believes in their own way and tries to defend their point of view. The first

one

believes that it is necessary to allocate more

money

for

education

than for

such

industries as

sports

and

recreation

, because of some probability that the coming new generation will not be educated The alternative point of view is based on advantages, and in

this

way other industries can be

further

developed. The problems associated with

this

issue and the allocation of

money

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have always been

one

of the most pressing problems around the world. How should we feel about deciding whether to do

this

and pay more attention to

education

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When discussing

this

controversial issue, it is impossible to give

one

very definite answer for sure. On the

one

hand, it is obvious that in any

country

, regardless of the laws,

education

is considered

one

of the main and important factors. It doesn't matter whether you like it or not you have to accept the fact that without

education

the

country

can't exist because over time there will be no people who

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continue to manage the

country

competently. A good example of

this

is Africa, a

country

with a small budget for

education

. Because of

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they have no young cadres who could develop the

country

On the other hand

, it can

also

be argued that not only

education

contributes to the development of the

country

, there are other industries

such

as

sports

and

recreation

. So they can develop the

country

from the other side, like culture and tourism. Take

for example

such

countries

as Argentina Spain Italy Maldives. All these

countries

are United by a propensity for

recreation

and

sports

, with

this

they are very developed from the side of tourism, culture, and

sports

and are among the top very well-off and popular

countries

. In conclusion, taking into account all of the above in our final analysis, we can say that both of these thoughts have a right to exist and both are inherently right. But in fact, history confirms that knowledge has been valued for centuries, and in some

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it has sometimes helped to solve and overcome problems,

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the developed

countries

themselves are

countries

with a good learning structure. And I can say that all

countries

should allocate more

money

to

education

.