Write an essay of about 250 words to answer the question: Sports and games create disturbance in students’ life because students cannot fully concentrate on their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As students’

schoolings

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become

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increasingly concerned by parents and teachers in the current context, factors influencing

this

academic progress are inevitably open to debate. Concerns surface as some people reckon that recreational

activities

such

as

sports

and video

games

render the

students’

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ability to entirely concentrate on their lessons. From my point of view, I partly disagree with

this

notion as there are several exceptions where partaking in leisure

activities

proves to be fruitful to the furtherance of one’s studies.

One

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the one hand, it is true that engaging in the aforementioned

activities

may exert significantly negative impacts on the students’ lives. To commence with,

this

would lead to a decrease in the

time

utilized for their

studyings

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studying

at school. As a matter of fact, students who spend a lengthy of

time

playing soccer or sitting in front

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computer’s screen might find it difficult to make room for their

learnings

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,

thus

leaving them with no

time

to fully absorb the past lessons and prepare for forthcoming ones.

Additionally

, it holds true that the students’ health

do

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not have the capability to cope with the strenuous schedule of excessive load of events, owing to the fact that they do not possess enough strength to withstand the tiredness and exhaustion ensuing from those recreational

activities

.

Consequently

,

this

weariness, in every likelihood, may lead to

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lack

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of concentration and,

therefore

, do discharge to

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overall

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quality of

studyings

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studying

in the long run.

On the other hand

, it is my contention that

while

sports

and

games

do prove detrimental to students’ school life, they can be advantageous if effectively implemented. The problems

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from those

activities

are not always what type of

sports

or genre of the

games

they play, rather it is the frequency they immerse themselves in them. Too much

time

can lead to

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inability to focus on lessons

while

the contrary might result in one’s unsatisfactory life;

for

this

reason, a sufficient amount of

time

should be

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.

This

would facilitate their

studying’s

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process at school by acting as a source of incentive and

also

a means of relaxation.

Furthermore

, the disappearance of these

activities

would ultimately lead to deleterious effects. Being bereft of what is an indispensable part of their lives, students may experience anxiety and

lack

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of willingness to do anything, particularly studying. In

this

instance,

such

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would only rub salt into the wound. All things considered, I am inclined to believe that a well- spent

time

on

sports

and

games

for students is of

best

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solution to

a

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successful academic

studyings

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studying

.