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Some people think parents should be forced to attend childcare course to learn how to take care of their children. Do you agree

#people #parents #childcare #course #care #children
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In every time
parent
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's knowledge and experience always have a big effect on their
child
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. But now day, a lot of
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parent
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parents
 don't have the knowledge to raise a
child
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; they just took their kid to school, and let the teacher take over. I think how to build a
child
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 to improve their true potential is the
parent
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 attend childcare courses, and it would help them to raise a youngster. So I agree a forced couples to attend a parenting course.
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, Parents influences their
child
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's behaviour, growth, health, indirectly because children like a sponge they do the same things that the father or mother does. So if the
parent
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 doesn't know about being a "true
parent
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"
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 their kids negative examples can be influenced to a
child
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's development and can lead to bad behaviour.
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, a lot of parents, when having the
first
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child
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, will feel disturbed when raising their children. From take care of them when they are babies, toddler age, to choose school when they in
child
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 age, how to deal with
child
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 poverty. The courses will help parents learn what their
child
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 needs at each developmental stage as well as prepare for the
next
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 stages for them. I think if the
parent
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 knows and be prepared in each stage they. Will raise their
child
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 with good qualities.
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, I think born and raise a
child
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 is very hard; when you decide to have a baby and raise them, you need a lot of courage and determination. And I think the key to be a good
parent
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 is confidence, so I think to attend a childcare course not only to prepare knowledge to be a
parent
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 but
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 mentally for them. In conclusion, I believe that childcare will help parents to understand their kids and raise them in the best way.

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