In the modern world, schools are no longer necessary because there is so much information available through internet, that they can just as well study at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I tend to disagree with
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of all, the major reason why people think that it is not necessary to have traditional schools and teachers is that it is relatively convenient to study online. Students can easily get access to
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and information, and take online courses, no matter when or where. They can just use the search engine like Google, ask any questions and dozen of pages will be resulted with answers and advice about the questions. The
Internet
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contains an endless supply of
knowledge
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and information that provides a convenient way for us to assess
knowledge
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.
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, there is no doubt that accomplished teachers cannot be replaced by artificial intelligence. They know how to select constructive and useful materials for the students and teach them in accordance with their aptitude.
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, teachers can talk to the students face to face, so that students can raise questions and the teachers can immediately figure out and explain to them.
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, the
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can only provide a large amount of
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and related data without selection. Unclear explanations on the
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might lead us to misconception and unintentionally the users would possibly open a negative website. My own experience could be a good illustration of
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case. When I was in a primary
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, I, without any purpose, clicked the advertising item which provided adult contents. Seeing that my teacher came fast and close that website.
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, it is obvious that the
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is providing a huge benefit except for academic subjects
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as communication skill, social skill through leadership, friendship and many others. Those kinds of skills cannot be figured out at home by our own, which means that the students still need to gain more at
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rather than through the
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, while the additional learning could be deserved out of the
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. At the same time, the more about using the
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for study may
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lead to the serious cause, like its influence the low of the health condition of the teenagers. Some pupil may suffer from short-sightedness and may need to wear a pair of spectacles to help them to achieve a better vision.
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, when students go to
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, they meet their peers and participate in activities that are organized by the schools. It not only improves their communication skills, but
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their mental ability, which may help them in their future for their career.
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, there is a survey conducted by Cambridge University which found that there are 50 per cent more chances of getting a job when students are educated from in comparison to at home through the
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, it makes the future bright for students. In conclusion, it is undeniable that the
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could not ever overtake the role of classroom schools, in the case of trained teachers since the
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consists of untrustworthy information. Learning only from the
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also
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causes people to be a social-social person.
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, I believed that schools and teachers are absolutely necessary for students to learn.
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