Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, it is argued that to make
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we need to look for those who have the same
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others think people who hold the opposite
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are the best ones.
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I believe that it is beneficial to have a sensible opinion. In
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essay, I am going to discuss both
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To begin
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, the majority of the masses believe that people who give the same opinions are best
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. In
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way, our
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will be more passionate to have a talk with us and feel closer to us.
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, if our friend talks about a family member who has done something wrong and feels worried about him, by having the same view and staying behind them, they will feel better.
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, our
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assumes we value them.
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, having the opposite
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may be beneficial as well. From my point of view, sometimes we need to talk about the facts that may make our
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sad and heartbroken, or have an adverse effect on them, but, it is worth it, and it depends on our
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's character .
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, if they are sensitive, we need to be more careful and cautious, but it does not mean not to be honest with them.
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, like the example I did above,
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of giving the same opinion, we could make our
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informed that their life is more important than anyone else even a family member.
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,
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can give them the view to make a proper decision to stop being worried. Sometimes our
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needs our help and talks to us, and they are looking for opposite
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.
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, we may be the unsuitable
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, and they would prefer to talk to the others in
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way.
To sum up
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, both of the ways of giving opinions that were mentioned above have their own benefits. I believe that giving opinions and expressing ideas should be logical, ethical, and dependent on their character . In
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way, we could be a better
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and I believe looking for
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type of person can be the best
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to make.
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Coherence and Cohesion
Consider refining your introduction to more clearly state the topic and your opinion. This sets an early expectation for your readers.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure your essay has both an engaging opening sentence and a definitive conclusion that reinforces your viewpoint. This structure is essential for keeping your readers oriented throughout your essay.
Task Achievement
Incorporate more specific examples to support your points. While discussing abstract concepts or opinions, grounding your argument in real-life or hypothetical situations helps in making your essay more compelling and convincing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • harmonious
  • stress-free
  • disagreements
  • conflicts
  • reinforce
  • validate
  • comforting
  • reassuring
  • broaden your understanding
  • perspectives
  • challenge intellectually
  • think critically
  • personal growth
  • development
  • healthy debates
  • communication skills
  • mutual respect
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