Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, it is argued that to make
friends
we need to look for those who have the same views
, whereas
others think people who hold the opposite views
are the best ones. While
I believe that it is beneficial to have a sensible opinion. In this
essay, I am going to discuss both views
.
To begin
, the majority of the masses believe that people who give the same opinions are best friends
. In this
way, our friends
will be more passionate to have a talk with us and feel closer to us. For example
, if our friend talks about a family member who has done something wrong and feels worried about him, by having the same view and staying behind them, they will feel better. As a result
, our partner
assumes we value them.
However
, having the opposite views
may be beneficial as well. From my point of view, sometimes we need to talk about the facts that may make our partner
sad and heartbroken, or have an adverse effect on them, but, it is worth it, and it depends on our partner
's character . For example
, if they are sensitive, we need to be more careful and cautious, but it does not mean not to be honest with them. For instance
, like the example I did above, instead
of giving the same opinion, we could make our partner
informed that their life is more important than anyone else even a family member. Consequently
, this
can give them the view to make a proper decision to stop being worried. Sometimes our partner
needs our help and talks to us, and they are looking for opposite views
. Otherwise
, we may be the unsuitable partner
, and they would prefer to talk to the others in this
way.
To sum up
, both of the ways of giving opinions that were mentioned above have their own benefits. I believe that giving opinions and expressing ideas should be logical, ethical, and dependent on their character . In this
way, we could be a better partner
and I believe looking for this
type of person can be the best friends
to make.Submitted by bb_emperator on
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