The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how aluminium
cans
are recycled. which contributes to environmental protection. It can be seen that the aluminium
cans
in the UK sold are recycled. There are a total
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stages in the diagram, from collecting used
cans
to reusing these
cans
like new ones.
The first step is
that the
cans
which are used are collected and taken to a place with the classification purpose. At
this
place, they are cleaned and sorted, and
then
they are shredded and compressed.In the
next
stage, the
cans
are heated until melting.
Subsequently
, after being melted, the
cans
are
then
rolled to a thickness of 2.5mm - 6mm in order to make a new can easily. The
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now is ready for the recycling step. At the final stage,
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the new
cans
which have just gone through the
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are delivered to the soft drink factories to make a complete product and reused.

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