The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how aluminium
cans
are recycled. which contributes to environmental protection. It can be seen that the aluminium cans
in the UK sold are recycled. There are a total 7
stages in the diagram, from collecting used Change preposition
of 7
cans
to reusing these cans
like new ones.
The first step is
that the cans
which are used are collected and taken to a place with the classification purpose. At this
place, they are cleaned and sorted, and then
they are shredded and compressed.In the next
stage, the cans
are heated until melting. Subsequently
, after being melted, the cans
are then
rolled to a thickness of 2.5mm - 6mm in order to make a new can easily. The mental
now is ready for the recycling step. At the final stage,Replace the word
mind
,
the new Change the punctuation
apply
cans
which have just gone through the reprocess
are delivered to the soft drink factories to make a complete product and reused.Wrong verb form
reprocessing
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