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Modern technology, such as personal computers and the internet, have made it possible for many people to do their work from home at least part of the time instead of going to an office everyday. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of the situation?

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Nowadays by using
such
 modern technologies like computers and internet working from
home
 had become easier and more convenient. Due to the use of
such
 technologies the
time
 spent in the office decreases and can be used for other beneficial works. There are some pros and cons of
this
, which I intend to describe in the
further
 paragraph. On the one hand, there are many advantages of modernization by using personal computers with Internet facilities people can
work
 from their
home
 and simultaneously can spend
time
 with the family.
Also
 the working
time
 in the office reduces and can be used for other beneficial works like spending
time
 in developing new skills, to pursue their hobbies and many more.
For instance
, in the recent situation entire world was suffering from a deadly disease called
covid
having or marked by a curve or smoothly rounded bend
curved
 19, the entire world was under the lockdown, and the people are not allowed to go out and
work
 but people continued their
work
 from
home
 by using the computers and the internet.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages
also
. By increase in use of the computers
instead
 of doing
work
 people get distracted and become lazy the utilise the
time
 in other activities like watching movies, playing video games, in scrolling the social media sites.
Moreover
, people's life becomes more sedentary and they spend the maximum
time
 in watching computers which indirectly affect their overall health.
In addition
, it
also
 leads to less human interaction, which leads to decrease in their confidence around the people. In the conclusion, I would like to pen down, saying that, the advantages overweight the disadvantages. In today's world computer and internet have made peoples
lif
a characteristic state or mode of living
life
 trouble free and can help them to manage their
work
 even from
home
.

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