Large business have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result , people gravitate towards buying their products . What problems does this causes ? What could be done to encourage people to but local product ?

In today's contemporary era local businessman
have
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will have
has
an opportunity to sell their
product
in
whole world
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the whole world
via globalisation
.
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Marketing and promotion large businesses have
enormose
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
enormous
budgets
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budgets, therefore
therefore
individuals have easily attracted towards purchasing their items
.
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.
this
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This
eassy
posing no difficulty; requiring little effort
easy
essay
issue
give a brief account of problems for the underlying issue and suggests
appropriate solution
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appropriate solutions
an appropriate solution
for the same. Nowadays, big businesses have quiet fund due to which they promote their
product
via advertisement among people
.
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.
for
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For
example, in India apple
iphone
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iPhone
11pro mobile phone is
advertise
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advertised
by the famous celebrity
salman
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Salman
khan and mostly people have
encourage
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encouraged
via watch advertise to purchase that cell phone.
In addition
,
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,
large business
are progressing
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is progressing
day by day because they provide good brand
such
as
gucci
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Gucci
,
prada
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Prada
and so on with discount
withwhich
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with which
people are happening encourage to purchase machine made
product
.
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.
Howere
, people
can not
can not
cannot
deny the fact that local
product
have
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has
oen
indefinite article, "an" is use before a vowel sound, "a" otherwise
an
importance therfore
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importance, therefore
importance therefore
local businessman should try to improve the quality of
product
and higher authority should
also
need to intervene and prevent international companies from
entring
a movement into or inward
entering
certain sector
.
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.
for
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For
instance
,
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,
indian
a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indian
government should allow a rule against china made
product
to use as a lower limit except
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
made
product
.
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Ti
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To
recapitulate
,
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,
local
product
is
also
a need of human life as well as machine made
product
therefore
all
retalier
a merchant who sells goods at retail
retailers
retailer
should keep
good brand
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the good brand product
a good brand product
product
as well as local
product
in their shop or shopping mall.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • monopolization
  • market diversity
  • consumer choice
  • cultural erosion
  • traditional crafts
  • concentration of wealth
  • economic growth
  • grassroots level
  • quality standards
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • financial incentives
  • tax breaks
  • subsidies
  • public awareness campaigns
  • reduced environmental impact
  • collaboratives, cooperatives
  • competitive edge
  • certification system
  • authenticity
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