Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

In
today
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today's
circumstances,
Technolgy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
leads the main role for all substances. Buying things on the internet is becoming commercial. In rapidity world
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people moving towards the online shopping
instead
of off-line systems
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The benefit involve in the online shopping is that
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It is possible to sit in one place and order an item from any corner of the town or place.It helps people to get the
desire
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desired
product by using the customer reviews or survey
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.
This
will help in getting the right product in terms of quality.Technology act as a bridge between people and
corporate
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corporations
companies
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companies'
company
products on the specific site like AmAzon
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Flipkart
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Traveltrolley
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Travel trolley
etc.
online
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Online
market
satisfying the expectation of the people
intems
a distinct part that can be specified separately in a group of things that could be enumerated on a list
items
intense
of
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on
offer at a huge level.
Hence
people looking forward for more things and browse for the products and delivered at the door step.
This
will reduce the fuel charge as well as control air
pollution which
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pollution, which
is a huge problem facing at present in town. The traffic congestion has been reduced at the maximum rate. The drawback of the online system
degrade
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degrades
the human interaction
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It will
effects
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affect
affects
the middle age employment. Online facing the warranty and guarantee issues at the peak. Sometimes
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the quality can't be expected on the online product
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There was a chance for wrong item or damaged item delivered as well as the refund process will be slow. The benefit of offline system is interaction and
good relationship
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good relationships
can be developed between the customer and the seller.The quality and
trustwoorthess
worthy of trust or belief
trustworthy
can be
expect
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expected
at a higher rate compared to
online
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the online market
market
. If a bank officer has the good relationship with the seller of the
certain
hanging cloth used as a blind (especially for a window)
curtain
shop
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the sales level of the bank will be at the higher rate and that will help in unexpected situation
also
. By concluding
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shopping in online
market
has the drawback and it takes time to replace
offline
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the offline market
market
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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