Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
In
today
circumstances, Suggestion
today's
Technolgy
leads the main role for all substances. Buying things on the internet is becoming commercial. In rapidity worldthe practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
,
people moving towards the online shopping Accept space
,
instead
of off-line systemsLinking Words
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The benefit involve in the online shopping is thatAccept space
.
,
It is possible to sit in one place and order an item from any corner of the town or place.It helps people to get the Accept space
,
desire
product by using the customer reviews or surveySuggestion
desired
.
Accept space
.
This
will help in getting the right product in terms of quality.Technology act as a bridge between people and Linking Words
corporate
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corporations
companies
products on the specific site like AmAzonSuggestion
companies'
company
,
FlipkartAccept space
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,
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Traveltrolley
etc.Suggestion
Travel trolley
online
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Online
market
satisfying the expectation of the people Use synonyms
intems
a distinct part that can be specified separately in a group of things that could be enumerated on a list
items
intense
of
offer at a huge level.Suggestion
on
Hence
people looking forward for more things and browse for the products and delivered at the door step.Linking Words
This
will reduce the fuel charge as well as control air Linking Words
pollution which
is a huge problem facing at present in town.
The traffic congestion has been reduced at the maximum rate.
The drawback of the online system Accept comma addition
pollution, which
degrade
the human interactionSuggestion
degrades
.
It will Accept space
.
effects
the middle age employment. Online facing the warranty and guarantee issues at the peak.
SometimesSuggestion
affect
affects
,
the quality can't be expected on the online productAccept space
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.
There was a chance for wrong item or damaged item delivered as well as the refund process will be slow.
The benefit of offline system is interaction and Accept space
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good relationship
can be developed between the customer and the seller.The quality and Suggestion
good relationships
trustwoorthess
can be worthy of trust or belief
trustworthy
expect
at a higher rate compared to Suggestion
expected
online
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the online market
market
.
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curtain
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also
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shopping in online Accept space
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market
has the drawback and it takes time to replace Use synonyms
offline
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the offline market
market
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Accept space
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