The line chart shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.

The line chart shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.
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The line chart represents four reasons that
people
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moved to the capital city of a particular
country
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during the
15 year
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period between 2000 and 2015.
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, the trend shows, more
people
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left the
country
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in 2015.
According to
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the line chart, the main reason that
people
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moved to the city was employment employed. 60000
people
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moved from a particular
country
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in 2000. It increased by about 93000
people
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in 2010. But it decreased in 2015 and it was 85000
people
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. The survey result shows the
second
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reason was to study. It rose significantly from 22000 to 85000
people
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in 2015. The chart shows, family or friends and adventure were other reasons. In
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, both had the same number of
people
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at the start of the period and it was 1000
people
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. But after a
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period, it has a different result. Family or friends had more importance. Over 2000
people
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went to the city for a family, but under 2000
people
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left the
country
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for adventure.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, country with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • relocation
  • migration
  • employment opportunities
  • educational facilities
  • vibrant lifestyle
  • healthcare access
  • medical services
  • social connections
  • infrastructure
  • transport facilities
  • data trends
  • survey results
  • capital city
  • allure
  • motivating factor
  • influencing
  • attracting
  • analysis
  • evaluation
  • assessment
  • consideration
  • exploration
  • introduction
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