The line chart shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.
The line chart represents four reasons that
people
moved to the capital city of a particular country
during the 15 year
period between 2000 and 2015. Add a hyphen
15-year
Overall
, the trend shows, more people
left the country
in 2015.
According to
the line chart, the main reason that people
moved to the city was employment employed. 60000 people
moved from a particular country
in 2000. It increased by about 93000 people
in 2010. But it decreased in 2015 and it was 85000 people
. The survey result shows the second
reason was to study. It rose significantly from 22000 to 85000 people
in 2015.
The chart shows, family or friends and adventure were other reasons. In ddition
, both had the same number of Correct your spelling
addition
people
at the start of the period and it was 1000 people
. But after a 15 year
period, it has a different result. Family or friends had more importance. Over 2000 Add a hyphen
15-year
people
went to the city for a family, but under 2000 people
left the country
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 3 times.
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