Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc.to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The issue of whether or not to enter

universiy

the body of faculty and students at a university

university

after leaving high school has been provoking a considerable controversy (among the public). While it can be claimed that it is preferable for the youth to choose

university

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a university

to foster their

education

, I am of the opinion that it is advisable for them to develop manual skills to contribute to society. In

this

essay, I am going to examine both views and support

opinion

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an opinion

opinions

the opinion

. On the

one

hand, for

decades universities

Accept comma addition

decades, universities

have always been teenagers’ preference after secondary

education

. Opportunities for high academic level may be

one

of the main reasons for believing

this

. As a matter of fact, for an individual to be able to occupy top jobs

such

as

lawyer

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a lawyer

or

doctor

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a doctor

, a college degree is a minimum requirement. Parents’ expectation for

bright future

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a bright future

the bright future

bright futures

for their children’s can be another point to consider. With the belief that only higher

education

can provide a person with a firm standing in society, most parents encourage or even force their kids to join colleges.

Therefore

, for people who want to pursue a brilliant career,

further

education

is not only a better choice, but

also

is essential.

On the other hand

, I strongly agree that young adults can be better off without a college degree.

Firstly

, many jobs

require

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requires

more practical knowledge

that is

not really something

university

can provide efficiently. People who start working rather than going to

university

would become more experienced, which is

one

of the essential elements to have/work in a successful profession. It is a fact that numerous successful businessmen have no academic degrees.

Secondly

, tuition fees are

one

of

the big

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the biggest

problems for most students and their family. Supporting a four-year period at

university

could become a financial burden for a lot of individuals and households, whereas/

in contrast

starting work as soon as finishing high schools would help them earn their living early and avoid spending a tremendous amount of money, exclusive of/ apart from possible college debt.

Moreover

, working early gives budding entrepreneurs a better opportunity to establish themselves before

competition

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the competition

gets tougher. In conclusion, while a

university

degree is a must for certain occupations, there are sectors that value work experience more. I definitely believe that getting experience and developing practical skills are more important to apply for a job in order to be sure of success.