The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.

The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.
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The graph above displays the
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of
sales
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all over the world in five of the most popular mobile companies in the
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from 2009 to 2013.
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, there was a noticeable increase in the
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of both
Samsung
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and Apple compared with the other three mobile brands over the five years. The chart reports that over the whole
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, the
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of both
Samsung
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and Apple increased.
Samsung
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sold approximately 450
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units
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and Apple sold around 150
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units
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. As can be seen from the graph, there was an observable decrease in the
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of Nokia and LG.
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, Nokia's
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were similar to
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Samsung
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in 2009 as it sold around 450
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in 2013, its
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decreased significantly to
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around 200
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items,
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the
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of LG was ranging from approximately 100
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to 50
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units
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in the same
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. ZTE's
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increased slightly over the whole
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, period, samsung, million, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global sales
  • Mobile phone brands
  • Market share
  • Trends
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Technological advancements
  • Innovation
  • Consumer preferences
  • Demographics
  • Market dominance
  • Brand loyalty
  • Comparative analysis
  • Sales figures
  • Data interpretation
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