Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car free day once every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages

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There ought to be a
day
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once every
month
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, where
private
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privately
owned vehicles are not to be allowed on the road and have a
car
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-free
day
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which is thought by some individuals. Having a no private
car
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day
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will lead to less traffic,
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less pollution for a
day
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.
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However there
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However, there
are
also
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drawbacks to be taken into account.
Firstly
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, one benefit of having a no
car
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day
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once a
month
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will definitely have less running cars and motorbikes on the
day
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which will reduce the emission level on the environment.
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, people who are used to go places only by private vehicle will experience the use and convenience of public transport, while saving the fuel cost at the same time.
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,
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
teenagers nowadays due to their high lifestyle pattern
are generally tend
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generally tend
to use owned
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and do not
wishes
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wish
to use public services will get a chance to experience the facility.
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, the possibility of people going to work or students going to school by
walk
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the walk
will increase.
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could
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result into turning adolescents towards using the government facility more often rather than just once a
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.
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, one problem by having
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car free
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a car free day
day
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is that council will need to arrange more buses and trains just for a
day
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every
month
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as more people will be travelling.
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, more drivers can be needed to operate the vehicles every
month
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, which again arises an issue for the government as
only required number
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the only required number
of drivers are available.
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, if 50 drivers run the buses on normal days,
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on a
car
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free
day
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due to high frequency of travellers the required numbers can go possibly double. Another possible issue is that workers and students travelling might face congestion into local transportation and
chances
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the chances
of running late to work or school may increases. In conclusion, while society can get some benefits from having
car
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free
day
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once a
month
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, it can
also
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lead to congestion on vehicles or council may be required more numbers of drivers, buses or trains.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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