Some people like to travel outside their country. Others would rather travel to tourist spots in their own country first, before travelling abroad. Which do you prefer to do and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.

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Traveling
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Travelling
is a really interesting topic. A lot of people like
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
but some prefer to
traveling
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travel
travelling
inside others find it
attracting
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attracts
is attracting
to travel abroad.
the
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The
other way around. The
first
reason why people would like to travel abroad. As young people most of us have a pretty established comfort zone. At home with
mom
informal term for a mother
mum
and dad, in a community that has known you for probably a good part of your life. You have your established friends, activities,
hangouts
an announcement distributed to members of the press in order to supplement or replace an oral presentation
handouts
and
possibly
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possible
jobs. We become comfortable in these daily roles and the idea of breaking out them can be scary and uncomfortable. The problem is, you learn the most in uncomfortable, unfamiliar situations. In our daily routines, you know how to act and respond to people and your surroundings. Being in a new place, with different people, who hold different values and go about life differently (or not so differently you may find) strips all that familiarity away. It can be scary, but once you figure out that you can connect with people despite differences, and you can navigate foreign environments, you become a smarter, more competent individual. Embrace the discomfort. Search for it, because it is helping you grow. The
second
reason
is being
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is
culturally sensitive is key in our globalizing world. It is not enough to say. It is important to look for underlying values that may explain a certain
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
in order to practice cultural sensitivity. A good example is when I was in Spain (especially in the south), where they take a 2-3 hour siesta and lunch in the middle of their work day. Many people view
this
cultural norm as the people just being lazy when it really has a lot more to do with the fact that historically Spaniards value family face time. Eating together as a family is more important to them than maximizing work time by scarfing a sandwich down at their desks. Being aware of cultural values and norms is not only fascinating, but can help us understand international issues and conflicts, or even relate to the cultural norms of a foreign business partner. It is an important skill to be able to shift perspectives and see where someone else is coming from. Cultural sensitivity will help you with your communication on both business and personal levels. That’s why I think people should
first
travel abroad rather than in their own country
first
.

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